Composer’s Compass

Composer’s Compass: Lyrical Paraphrasing

by admin on February 22, 2012

Paraphrasing, or the rewording of something written or spoken by someone else, is a great skill to learn.  Often a deeper meaning of the work is achieved through the basic steps of paraphrasing.  I have found this to be an exciting songwriting technique when working with individuals with special needs.  Often my students have a specific artist or group of songs that they want to listen to or perform over and over again.  For some of my student’s, teaching them about lyrical paraphrasing is a great way to validate their song “favorites” while incorporating new skills into their session.  Here are some basic skills to address when paraphrasing lyrics:

  1. Select one or two phrases or lyrical sentences from the song.  Read it until you understand it’s meaning or overall message.
  2. Take away the visual or written line.  Jot down the key words or points on a piece of paper or white board.
  3. Create synonyms for the main key words by using a thesaurus or other resource, or look for new words within a catergory.
  4. Look for ways to shorten or lengthen the phrases or sentences.  Write out or type your new ideas and lyrics.
  5. Repeat these steps as you move throughout the song.

Example: “Superman” by Taylor Swift

Tall, dark and super manly
Puts papers in his briefcase and drives away
To save the world or go to work
It’s the same thing to me 

He’s got his mother’s eyes, his father’s ambition
I wonder if he knows how much that I miss him
I hang on every word you say.

Here is the lyrical paraphrasing created by one of my students:

Athletic and smart and always a mystery.
He zips up his jacket and walks away from me.
He’s probably off to some sporting event, flying away on this private jet.

He’s got his mother’s smile, his father’s personality.
Does he realize how much I love, will he look my way?

Here’s the completed song with lyrics by K. Hansen.

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Adventures In Songwriting: My Process

Guest Post by Rachel Rambach, MM, MT-BC

There’s a learning curve involved in honing any new skill, and songwriting is no exception.  My early days as a songwriter were filled with experimentation and abandoned attempts, but that is what led to the process I use today – the one that works best for me.

I’ll start with the big question: which comes first, the lyrics or the music?  My music therapy intern and I were just discussing this the other day, and it turns out that we have different answers.  The good news is that there is no right answer.

Personally, I like to start with the lyrics.  Most of the songs I write have an educational or therapeutic purpose, and I need to make sure that all of the necessary content is covered.  But the cool thing is that as I type the lyrics, a melody inevitably manifests itself in my head.  I keep my iPhone nearby so that I can use the voice recorder app to record it before it escapes.

My songs follow a predictable formula, because my music therapy students like predictability.  My chorus needs to be catchy and contain the most valuable information, since it is repeated several times throughout each tune.  The verse is where I can get down to the specific details, whether I’m writing a song about rhyming words or buckling a seatbelt.

Once I’ve completed my lyrics, it’s time to make sense out of the melody I hummed into my iPhone earlier.  I like to use paper and pencil for this part, so I usually print out my double-spaced lyrics and get down to work.

After playing through the chords I’ve figured out based on the melody, I type them into the computer to complete my lead sheet.  Next comes my favorite part: recording.  But that’s another topic for another day :)

Be sure to visit my blog, Listen & Learn Music, to read the first post in my “Adventures In Songwriting” series as well as upcoming installments.  A big thanks to Wade for the invitation to guest post here at Time for Music!

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